Yaad hain wo din?
Jab hum the kitney pass
Sadaa dost rehney ki
Thi humaari aas.
Saath ghumein, saath kheley,
Aur kitni maari gappey
Pata nahi kitni this sach
Aur kitni thi bas lappey...
Wo sunherey pal aur
Who sunheri baatein,
Dekho bhool na jaana tum
Yeh sunheri yaadein.
Hassi, mazaak, baatein
Baney jeeven key usool,
Maaf kar dena mujhey,
Hui ho agar koi bhool.
Prarn liya tha jab humnein,
Aankhon sey paani gaya jhalak,
Saath rahengey hum sada hi,
Chaahey rahein ho jaaye alag.
Samay ney humko murdkar na dekha,
Aur aagey chalta gaya,
Ek chauraahey par khadey hain hum,
Jahaan sey saara jahaan lagey naya.
Akeley ho tum, Akeley hain hum,
Saamney ek naya jahaan,
Par yaad rakhungi mei tumhein,
Chaahey mai jaun jahaan.
27 comments:
sexc
Wonderful .. really ! :)
A class VI poem, you actually took me back to those days :)
Keep finding out some mroe pages from your diary !
Sourav .. in love with me and life!! :)
Yup!
Well written!
:)
Beautiful Write Up Dear!!!!!!
Awesome poem!
Awesome myaan!! =)
Keep up the great work.
Oh yeaa - i like your new template.. =)
Nice memories in the form of cute poem. :)
hmmm...
"Its funny how we give such special positions to people who don't even look behind at us, not even once..................
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sahi hai...tu 6th mein bhi ittna mast likkhtie thie!
its very nice wrk, considering it to be done by a sixth grader, so u've been quite a writer since childhood huh?^__^...neways...its always gr8 to revisit the old days and cherish the memories:)
Tushar :)
thanks !
Sourav :)
heheheheh :)
Strange naa ?
I however lost my creative touch in writings ! seriously !
I was much better before :)
thanks !
Gauri :)
thankuu :)
Creativity :)
thanku :)
Merlin :)
thanks !
thanks for dropping by as well :)
Moonlight :)
Thanks !
Even I have a great affiliation towards it :D
chandrika shubham :)
seems your first visit here :)
thanks alot :)
Tamanna :)
tabhie acha likhti thi !
ab to bekaar likhti hu !!!
hehehehe :)
thanku :)
Rahul :)
thanku :)
I surprisingly wrote that well !
ab to everything is kinda lost :D
sahin hain...nicely put across :)
6'th haan...ok :P
Anurag :)
hahaahahaha :D
YES :D
funny na?
You see the born writer :D
Thanks :)
I could not write a single straight line while I was in class 6.
Kudos to u that you could think and write so much.
Born talent..:)
Loved it.
Cheers
Nuts
Nipun :)
hehehee :D
Thankuu ! :)
maybe ;)
:P
friends and memories\m/
Raj :D
:) :)
its awesome :) first time and liked ur blog :)
thankyou so much :) :)
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