Sunday, February 21, 2010

Kuch Ankaheen Baatein...

Yaad hain wo din?

Jab hum the kitney pass

Sadaa dost rehney ki

Thi humaari aas.


Saath ghumein, saath kheley,

Aur kitni maari gappey

Pata nahi kitni this sach

Aur kitni thi bas lappey...


Wo sunherey pal aur

Who sunheri baatein,

Dekho bhool na jaana tum

Yeh sunheri yaadein.


Hassi, mazaak, baatein

Baney jeeven key usool,

Maaf kar dena mujhey,

Hui ho agar koi bhool.


Prarn liya tha jab humnein,

Aankhon sey paani gaya jhalak,

Saath rahengey hum sada hi,

Chaahey rahein ho jaaye alag.


Samay ney humko murdkar na dekha,

Aur aagey chalta gaya,

Ek chauraahey par khadey hain hum,

Jahaan sey saara jahaan lagey naya.


Akeley ho tum, Akeley hain hum,

Saamney ek naya jahaan,

Par yaad rakhungi mei tumhein,

Chaahey mai jaun jahaan.


P.S. I scribbled this poem in one of my diaries when I was in class 6th. While cleaning my desk last week, I found a shabby, torn sheet of paper which refreshed certain nostalgic memories buried deep down in the past. Time really passes by so fast, yet each moment has its own very importance in one's life. Its funny how we give such special positions to people who don't even look behind at us, not even once..................

27 comments:

Tushar Mangl said...

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S said...

Wonderful .. really ! :)

A class VI poem, you actually took me back to those days :)

Keep finding out some mroe pages from your diary !

Sourav .. in love with me and life!! :)

Gauri Mathur said...

Yup!
Well written!
:)

Creativity said...

Beautiful Write Up Dear!!!!!!

Merlin said...

Awesome poem!

Moonlight said...

Awesome myaan!! =)

Keep up the great work.

Oh yeaa - i like your new template.. =)

Chandrika Shubham said...

Nice memories in the form of cute poem. :)

tamanna said...

hmmm...
"Its funny how we give such special positions to people who don't even look behind at us, not even once..................
"

sahi hai...tu 6th mein bhi ittna mast likkhtie thie!

Rahul Khatri said...

its very nice wrk, considering it to be done by a sixth grader, so u've been quite a writer since childhood huh?^__^...neways...its always gr8 to revisit the old days and cherish the memories:)

Pankhuri said...

Tushar :)

thanks !

Pankhuri said...

Sourav :)

heheheheh :)
Strange naa ?
I however lost my creative touch in writings ! seriously !
I was much better before :)

thanks !

Pankhuri said...

Gauri :)

thankuu :)

Pankhuri said...

Creativity :)

thanku :)

Pankhuri said...

Merlin :)

thanks !
thanks for dropping by as well :)

Pankhuri said...

Moonlight :)

Thanks !
Even I have a great affiliation towards it :D

Pankhuri said...

chandrika shubham :)

seems your first visit here :)

thanks alot :)

Pankhuri said...

Tamanna :)

tabhie acha likhti thi !
ab to bekaar likhti hu !!!
hehehehe :)

thanku :)

Pankhuri said...

Rahul :)

thanku :)
I surprisingly wrote that well !
ab to everything is kinda lost :D

Anurag said...

sahin hain...nicely put across :)

6'th haan...ok :P

Pankhuri said...

Anurag :)

hahaahahaha :D
YES :D
funny na?
You see the born writer :D

Thanks :)

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Unknown said...

I could not write a single straight line while I was in class 6.
Kudos to u that you could think and write so much.
Born talent..:)

Loved it.

Cheers

Nuts

Pankhuri said...

Nipun :)

hehehee :D
Thankuu ! :)
maybe ;)

Raj said...

:P

friends and memories\m/

Pankhuri said...

Raj :D

:) :)

Mr Happy said...

its awesome :) first time and liked ur blog :)

Pankhuri said...

thankyou so much :) :)