
In this struggle of existing, being, surviving
I have lost my roots,
My desire, my wishes,
Myself, all are forgotten.
I turned around to trace back my path
But, alas, the winds of the time have blown away my footprints.
Sighing, I moved ahead...
Trying to recall who I was, but, to no avail.
My friends are not there
To remind me
Who I am.
I lost them somewhere along the way
And, now, I negotiate,
Alone,
Through the thick and thin,
Without purpose, without aim,
I struggle my way through...






23 comments:
Its beautiful piece of art.
But it has a sad tone in it, a melancholy,
trying to retrace the steps, that never yields anything but agony.
but turn around, and friends would be two steps behind, always.
Hats off.
Regards
Blasphemous Aesthete
and sometimes I keep sitting on my window sill waiting for the wind to revert back that wiped off my footprints...
i still wait!
p.s: i love you!
losing oneself is a mystery of sorts. it isnt desired, it isnt fated, its juts plain stupidity :)
i missed you!! it's been awhile!!
nice poem! though a bit sad and pessimistic..i can feel the emotions..thumbs up~! :P
Anonymous someone :)
thank you so much :)
probably I am trying to locate my friends :)
thanks :)
Shruti! :)
Absolutely!
P.S. I love you too!
Raj! :)
I know!
but its essential for the maintainance of balance in one's life! in terms of emotions :)
if the good is desired, the bad must be tasted! :)
haina?
Ayu :)
thanks for dropping dear!
I missed you too!
I know its been long!!
thanks again :)
Sad note, yet positively beautiful !
Loved the picture and the words, both! :)
Hidden...in love with me and life! :)
Sourav!
thank you! :)
ain't that struggle called life?
Priya :)
Somewhat! ;)
My friends are not thereTo remind meWho I am.
I lost them somewhere along the way,
Liked this ! Even i have lost many of my friends along the way :)
I just think, the ending should have been optimistic..Neverthless, Nice post..
Prasad!
yeah! maybe!
but then sometimes a sad ending is worth the read :)
thanks alot :)
life is full of fun and struggle@@@
Jesson :)
absolutely!
Beautiful!!Fresh, original and surprising..Loved the poem.
Happy blogging..
Netha :)
thanks alot :)
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an amazing piece of writing :)
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