Thursday, June 3, 2010

In this struggle...


In this struggle of existing, being, surviving
I have lost my roots,
My desire, my wishes,
Myself, all are forgotten.
I turned around to trace back my path
But, alas, the winds of the time have blown away my footprints.
Sighing, I moved ahead...
Trying to recall who I was, but, to no avail.
My friends are not there
To remind me
Who I am.
I lost them somewhere along the way
And, now, I negotiate,
Alone,
Through the thick and thin,
Without purpose, without aim,
I struggle my way through...

25 comments:

Anonymous Someone said...

Its beautiful piece of art.

But it has a sad tone in it, a melancholy,
trying to retrace the steps, that never yields anything but agony.
but turn around, and friends would be two steps behind, always.

Hats off.

Regards

Blasphemous Aesthete

Shruti said...

and sometimes I keep sitting on my window sill waiting for the wind to revert back that wiped off my footprints...

i still wait!

p.s: i love you!

Raj said...

losing oneself is a mystery of sorts. it isnt desired, it isnt fated, its juts plain stupidity :)

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

i missed you!! it's been awhile!!

nice poem! though a bit sad and pessimistic..i can feel the emotions..thumbs up~! :P

..pAnKHuRi.. said...

Anonymous someone :)


thank you so much :)

probably I am trying to locate my friends :)

thanks :)

..pAnKHuRi.. said...

Shruti! :)


Absolutely!

P.S. I love you too!

..pAnKHuRi.. said...

Raj! :)


I know!
but its essential for the maintainance of balance in one's life! in terms of emotions :)

if the good is desired, the bad must be tasted! :)
haina?

..pAnKHuRi.. said...

Ayu :)


thanks for dropping dear!
I missed you too!

I know its been long!!

thanks again :)

Sourav C. Pandey said...

Sad note, yet positively beautiful !
Loved the picture and the words, both! :)

Hidden...in love with me and life! :)

..pAnKHuRi.. said...

Sourav!

thank you! :)

Priya Joyce said...

ain't that struggle called life?

..pAnKHuRi.. said...

Priya :)

Somewhat! ;)

pRasad said...

My friends are not thereTo remind meWho I am.

I lost them somewhere along the way,


Liked this ! Even i have lost many of my friends along the way :)

I just think, the ending should have been optimistic..Neverthless, Nice post..

..pAnKHuRi.. said...

Prasad!

yeah! maybe!
but then sometimes a sad ending is worth the read :)

thanks alot :)

Jesson And Rey Ann said...

life is full of fun and struggle@@@

..pAnKHuRi.. said...

Jesson :)

absolutely!

Netha Hussain said...

Beautiful!!Fresh, original and surprising..Loved the poem.
Happy blogging..

..pAnKHuRi.. said...

Netha :)

thanks alot :)

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thanks


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